Pechaflikr Narratives

Toady for this week for writing we had to finish our writing dlo because it will be good to show all people about our learning at Panmure Bridge School. My partner was Joshua and we made a dlo about pechaflikr, pechaflilkr is something you make out of an story that tells someone what is the story about then we moved on to our link ideas between paragraphs what we had to do is link our comments of what the story is gonna be about so Joshua and i put our information and powerful words on to the link ideas between paragraphs then we paint a picture with words to show not tell what was happening. this was an good activity with my partner so we can do this an another time and the hard bit was trying to add more powerful words.